tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5978699582877280833.post4198226264261429381..comments2010-11-18T17:37:17.173+03:00Comments on The Kidnappers Private Limited: The Kidnappers Private Limited - Chapter TwoMohammed Musthafahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10211307048155699461noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5978699582877280833.post-41216376184553489482010-05-19T15:24:49.728+03:002010-05-19T15:24:49.728+03:00The Kid must be Herb, and well, the last part was ...The Kid must be Herb, and well, the last part was a bit confusing and you could've made it a bit more graphic, but an interesting read though!pawanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07623152354184765339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5978699582877280833.post-24509562546916122032010-04-29T11:56:48.213+03:002010-04-29T11:56:48.213+03:00Why would he put the kid in a Deluxe suit? And you...Why would he put the kid in a Deluxe suit? And you need to let the readers know somewhere, maybe as a split scene back to Cafe Le Verdan, who you're referring as the 'Kid'. I know who it is only because I've read the next chapter. But I was quite confused here. <br /><br />Chapter 2: 3.5Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07985268676317106392noreply@blogger.com